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Old 12-07-03, 12:28 AM   #5
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yo that had good flow.....i liked it....not the best but its up there....my opinion I think U Used Your Chorus to Much.....but the chorus was still Good...pacaso mac I wont ask Why U hate em........Your structure could use some work but allround a good read Peace 7/0 Kuz (v)
-Plz return thre favor And hit up "Life" Aiight

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