it was a kinda boring topic, mostly self glorification, and lots of filler like the other guy said... some things didnt make sense like: "mic this" which doesnt really mean anything.. i know what ur getting at, it just sounds kinda dumb... your flow was off at times, but was ok throughout the whole piece... you used some advanced vocab and some multies, so i'll give u some points for that... you'll elevate with time, peace...

6/10