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Old 12-07-03, 01:22 AM   #12
wogzta
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Masta C, i'll give your piece 9.5/10.... you had some great emotion, you kept consistent multies and internals, and your piece flowed pretty much perfectly throughout the entire read.... great job! the only thing u didnt have that great was vocab, besides "optics" you didnt have much stimulating words... but the rest was great

MC Uski, you had some problems... although your piece was more storylike than Masta C's, the flow went off towards the middle to the end, and u didnt have advanced rhymes like multies and internals... same with the vocab... but your piece was above average... 7/10

9.5/10 + 7/10 = 16.5/20 = 8.25/10

so altogether, you guys make a pretty dope team.. nice work guys and keep dropping
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