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Old 12-07-03, 02:40 AM   #2
Ace Of Spades
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long...it would be much more attractive if you fixed up the
structure man...it would also make it a way easier and better
read...so yea...try fixing that up...also...the rhymes and flow
could use some work...or maybe its jus the structure that makes
it hard to distinguish...came with nice vocab...the topic was great.
nice drop man...props
peace

ps. check out my thread wen i post it up in a few...thanx
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