Yo fam, this was tight. All though the third verse was not as good as the others. The reading makes you sound liek Eminem a lil. The chorus was iight. I got the story, so dont worry about that. And I understand what you mean about the vocab. Besides, I really dont pay attention to voacb, but what the pice would sound like fo real. Anyway, this was in all a good piece. 7/10
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