I liked part one and I liked part two...

I think your emotion showed more in the first one...

But this one definately had better vocab and complexity.

Plus, it made me want to hear part three, so...

Kudos, my man.

Except for the forced rhyme on "summit/commit", this was pretty near flawless.

8.75/10

Peace

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