Surprisingly good verse here, dawg...

I was pretty sure I was gonna hate it cuz of the title, but it turned out to be pretty deep with good emotion in it.

Wasn't thrilled with your rhyme scheme at the begining, but you picked it up and your flow improved as the verse went along.

I'd have added some more complex vocab to this...

But all in all, pretty dope piece...7.25/10

And if it's true, man...

Then take care of that wife and daughter...

I know of which I speak.

Peace

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