This was a pretty bad verse, man...

No offense, just...it's real elementary.

Horrible format, weak and simple rhyme scheme, no wordplay whatsoever.

I guess it's ok for a standing on the corner rap...

But not for an Open Mic.

Elevate, my man, elevate.

Peace

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