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IP:
This was a pretty bad verse, man...
No offense, just...it's real elementary.
Horrible format, weak and simple rhyme scheme, no wordplay whatsoever.
I guess it's ok for a standing on the corner rap...
But not for an Open Mic.
Elevate, my man, elevate.
Peace
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