I asked myself yesterday, I said "Self, is your drop getting slept on because you're a newb?" And myself said back to me, "I think so self." Damn my newb status. Anyways, uppin this in hopes that you fine residents of Rapbattles will be wiling to overlook my lowly status and give me some feedback on this piece. Can't elevate without constructive criticism, so help a newb out.

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