Thread: What If?
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Old 12-07-03, 06:07 PM   #9
Lethargic
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Simple yes, but it definitely conveyed the message appropriately. Wasn't a bad piece by any means. Flow fell off at times, but not to where it was unreadable. It did have a weird read to it though...

I didn't really like how you entered the Matrix into it. It wouldn't have been too bad, but you focused on that too much. I see where you were going with it, but I think it just detracted from the piece. It was still a nice drop though. Keep it up.
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