Thread: The Sacrifice
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Old 12-07-03, 06:28 PM   #2
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This was alright...i didnt really like the structure though, but it wasnt bad its just the way you layed it out....but you did have some good multies in all your lines, i liked that...flow was alright i thought, got off at a few points...but this was a pretty good piece...keep at it.
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