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Old 12-07-03, 07:10 PM   #15
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My Opinion....
13th Deciple: Nice flow... beat is good for the topic... good delivery... lyrics arent really to topic... hook is ok. 2nd verse spoke more on the topic than the first... it ok a decent track

AxL is God: I didn't know ur Phobia.. the same Phobia from ES? I like the intro.... beat is ok for the topic. delivery is pretty good... first verse sorta on topic. No Hook? 2nd verse, on topic more... flow is ok... off beat at a couple of points..

MethodZ: one of those deep beats... little emotion. delivery is ok... 1st verse on topic.. flow is ok, a little off at points. Hook is pretty good... 2nd verse, not on topic as much as the others... still no emotion.. "things are getting boring..." lol u said it yaself. flow is off a little at first. NO EMOTION.... boring. I'm done with u.. ok track but no emotion... work on that.

Chrit: intro is good... like the beat. quality can be a little better... flow is good... good emotion & delivery, content is good..on topic... Hook is pretty good. 2nd verse. "blood stains disappear from battlefields" << Dope.. still on topic. I'm feelin' this.


Just giving you guys feedback b\c I know ur wondering what ppl think of it...

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