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Old 12-07-03, 07:32 PM   #8
Koalatee
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Feeble Minded wins this one without a doubt. . B.I. had a few concepts, but worded them horrifically. I'd recommend upping the overall complexity in your writing, B.I., & taking more time on your work.

Highlights
BI: "based on Intuition...a Feeble Mind contemplates its own Fate...
..between a Rock n a Hard Place..
it decides whether to Masterbate or jus Dial-A-Date..."

FM: "a comedian.. go back to front lines...i love these funny midgets
cuz how can u key a verse that took over 20 minutes?"

V: Feeble Minded
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