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Old 12-07-03, 08:11 PM   #2
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This was alright i thought....your sturcture could use some work though...your lines are all different lengths, short and long, try to keep them around the same length so its structured good and it helps the flow out as well...flow in this was ok..could have added some more multies and internals to help it out though...but this was alright..keep at it.
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