aight....here's the breakdown........gunshotz had overall better punches and flow..................profit you had some good ideas but your rhyme scheme needs to be changed up and then it will sound much better................you need to add some harder hittin punches as well and shit will be all good.....................no hatin just tryin to help out and throw some sound advice............so the overall vote goes to gunshotz...........
do me a favor and vote on this shit.....................
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