well i though that was a good decent Read......i liked ya flow it stayed on Target the hole way through....the chorus was tight.......the structure was good your lines werent to long or too short..Nice topic ti was a godd one...Multies were there that good not enough in the open mis these day........allround it was about 9/10 Keep that shit Droping Kuz
Could ya return the favour aiight Peace

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