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Old 12-07-03, 11:04 PM   #2
Menik
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This was ok i thought...your chorus was alright....your structure is a bit better than your other pieces i think, your getting better at that, still they are kinda long and uneven, just work on keep them around the same length though so it helps the flow....flow was ok, could have been better though i thought...had a few multies but add some more...overall this was ok...keep at it.
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