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Old 12-08-03, 12:58 AM   #2
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but this was alright i thought....your structure was alright could use a bit of a touch up though....flow was ok, try adding some multies and internals to it to help that out a bit....vocab in this was alright, could be up'd though...for a freestyle it was alright...keep at it.
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