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Originally posted by t-west
Opener- MC Free
Closer- ...
Punchlines - MC Free
Flow- MC Free
Structure- MC Free
Enjoyment- MC Free
Bill, ur stuff doesnt flow well, work on dat, shorten ur lines or sumthin, cuz the way u have it now is really affecting the pwoer of ur punchlines.
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