i wouldn't say 5hifty murdered XiiV...but he did have a much better structure, flow, and punches....XiiV u battle like a head from HHD...it don't work here.....u had some senseless wordplay....for example...
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Your Verse Is Like Putting "Streets On Tropical Beaches"...Cuz Your "St.Aisle (style)"-Sukks...(st.=street)
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^^didn't make sense and was pointless....
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I Mutilate Deformed Sluts...Put "Nostrils At His Side"...He's 'Out Of It' Like "Hip-Noses"...(hypnosis)
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^^this is what's called FORCED wordplay....it makes some sense...but it's pointless and irrelevant to what ur doing...
BREAKDOWN
Multis - XiiV
Metas - Tie (XiiV had some senseless ones)
Wordplay - Tie (same as above)
Personals - Neither (none of u threw a direct punch)
Punches - 5hifty (hit harder and made more sense)
Vocab - XiiV
Flow - 5hifty
Creativity - Tie
Complexity - XiiV
Structure - 5hifty
RhymeScheme - 5hifty
Overall - 5hifty only gets this because XiiV had some pointless lines and forced wordplay...don't get me wrong...some of them were tight....but 5hifty had a more understandable and harder approach....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote...
peace
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