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Old 12-08-03, 02:01 AM   #4
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ok, flow wasnt bad....could have used some mutlies to help it out....structure wasnt bad but could use a little touch up....content was ok but nothing really stood out to me...vocab was basic and needs some upping...overall it was ok but you got some work to do...keep dropping
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