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But i thought this was pretty good thought...i liked the chorus, it flowed pretty well, as did the whole piece, the flow was pretty much on point through it i thought, well done...vocab was good in this also....You had good multies in here, i liked that....long read but it was worth it...overall good piece here...keep at it.