short but sweet....

this was almost perfect... it flowed well, vocab was awesome, you used multis and internals (which is a big thumbs up from me, I dont like much stuff that doesnt have multis) and the emotion was great... nice imagery and wordplay

dope lines:

The taste of tears colored crimson, it’s an everlasting story//
Memories triggered from lashes, the scenes flash before me//

I’m just a child growing up, yet each second spent is a threat//
The mind of mine rewinds the times to pray one day I forget//

The threads of truth have been torn, the music violently faded//
The smiles and laughter now unworn the lies are silently stated//

what else was cool is how u held back the true meaning, and let us interpret it in our own way.. u remind me of aesop rock

dope <thumbs up>

9.75/10

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