Dude...

That's a little whack...

Your rhyme scheme needs work.
You need to shorten ya lines some...

But, ya hit this cat fairly hard, which I guess ya meant ta do.

Pretty primative were ya punches, but they were there.

The therapy part was pretty funny.

Decent, but needs alot of work.

Peace

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