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Old 12-08-03, 10:06 AM   #9
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hard battle to choose from....honestly the topic of choice was shit..lol....but....here's how i see this....Feeble stayed with the right concepts and had a better structure and flow.....Realist came with more originality....he stayed more on topic...and spoke the truth in some parts....for example..

Quote:
From The Realist:
What is he thinking, love is not childsplay
Is sex all that men thinks about these days


BREAKDOWN
Flow - Feeble Minded
Vocab - Tie
Structure - Feeble Minded
Originality - The Realist
Emotion - Feeble Minded
Creativity - The Realist
Consistency With Topic - The Realist
RhymeScheme - The Realist
Overall - hard choice like i said....but i think Realist edged this with his creativity and consistency of the topic.....don't get me wrong....Feeble had good shit too....but Realist got it....no hate to either of u...just a vote...

Vote - The Realist

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