Aiight.......
Heres da breakdown!!
sizz:shyt wus weak.....flow wus off,i think 1 or 2 lines didnt even rhyme!!...Punch's were weak(elevate)!!........Overall Verse succed,jus practice more!!
This is only the ‘beginnin’ Time for your mine ‘bendin’/
A ‘cleansin’ by fire fuck “hydro” - I exhale “Nitro” when ‘spittin’ -
lava ‘engulfin’ your ‘endorphins’ so you’ ll feel the “pain” /
of my lyrical “flames” ‘scorchin’ the hell out of your ‘origin’/
until you ‘morphin’ into a bitch cause a corpse named ‘Morgan’/
donated her ‘organs’ after this ‘torchin’/
I’ll “blaze” you until you eyez “glaze” like ‘crispy crème’/
Fuck with Sizz and become a part of a ‘crispy scene’/
So I ‘quickly bring’ your “azz on” as you ‘fit between’ /
The “talons”of a true fire spittin ‘Dragon’ that’ll make you “shit yo jeans!!
^^ dis kid needs da book "Rap For Dumbies"!!
Ok Now
DA:This wus an aiight verse punch's werent dat strong but dey were there,flow wus good n on point,structure wasnt bad.....Overall da verse wus goood!!....Keep it up!
i spray bullets at nigga's who come to test me//1
fuckin wit shadow will get u 9 bullets in ya chest b//2
im leathal and ill//3
i shoot to kill//4
i got sizz shocked payin my electric bill//5
by the end of this battle this cracker be knocked out cold//6
while i got his girl goin up and down my dick like a go-go pole//7
ima take this white boy though my own version of hell//8
you aint catchin bricks bitch, u catchin shells//9
better hope the crowd save u by the motherfuckin bell//10
^^ not bad keep elevating!!
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Reason:I feel his verse is dominant over sizz!!
Aiight nice battle DA,..as for sizz elevate kid!!....u'l get better!!