Aiight....

Heres da breakdown......

Nok:Verse wus overall weak wit da punch;s,flow wus good,wordplay wus aiight,structure wus fine...soo it wus an aiight verse.....keep it up kid!!

How can “born to kill” battle me?...wit a 50-50 losin streak
Beat this “vet” down you see…RB’s resident herb of the week
This boys weak n meak…How can he spit at least one hot line?
Answer….He can’t…So can Born please fuckin stop bitin mine?
Cos my Vizion Nok’s losers out of the frame into the firin line
Punches hit wit Heavyweight power n dislocate ya spine
My flows sublime…So I hit Vets up quick without respec’
So don’t forget, add this 73rd loss of your proudly to your rec

^^ da only thing wrong is da punch's were weak!!..(elevate)

Ok Now

b2k:NIce verse,flow wus good,structure was nice,...Punch's werent dat strong,maybe like 2 or 3 actually landed soo that is overall better den noks cuz da punch's were stronger den his punch's!!....Nice job!

Kid, I'm a giant, facin me, Manchester's comin up short...
Cuz the only time ya ever elevated, was in ya backyard fort.
So I'm a talk about ya rhymes, all tha dope skill ya got...
But don't think ya gettin props, ^^^^ that's not saying alot.
Nok'd, ya whack, but to each his own, I just don't care...
But you're alone, cuz even ya own, really don't want ya there.
This kid used ta be bright, but not anymore, now he can't think...
See, his cup runneth over with knowledge, until he took a drink.

^^ nice verse....

Quote:Cuz the only time ya ever elevated, was in ya backyard fort.<<< dat wus ok!

Quote:So I'm a talk about ya rhymes, all tha dope skill ya got...
But don't think ya gettin props, ^^^^ that's not saying alot.<<<dat wus a good punch!!

dats all i have to say!!

Vote:b2k

Reason:He had more punch's dat hit!!.....good battle!!