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Old 12-08-03, 11:29 AM   #17
FlowzLuCiouS
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Aiight.....

Da Breakdown....

Spiro:i dont think dis verse wus hott at all,flow wus good,structure wusnt,wordplay wus aiight but da punch's which is where it counts were weak soo elevate on dat!!

Yo, look its Special K, he gets eat out my fat women everyday/
look im even going first, this bitch aint got shit, he's worst then fred durst//
yo look at this kid, he aint no man, he'd still be a virgin if it wasnt for his right hand///
dont worry, we'll get you a guide on how to be a rapper, you'd be better off reading it backwards from the last chapter////
somebody dropped this kid on his head, i have a feeling his mom did it, but the bitch won't admit it/////
and all this gibberish you spit, you need to kill it, its like dying in my sleep, i don't feel it//////
you call yourself Kautious, but your more like some bitch thats obnoxious///////

Overall verse wus weak!!

Quote: he'd still be a virgin if it wasnt for his right hand///

^^ Bittin line form mtv mc battles!!.....not cool!!....is dat another banned memmber??!!

Ok Now

Kautious:nice verse shyt wus good ,flow wus there,structure was good,n where it counts Punch's were good!!.....keep it up!!

-Dysfunctional thoughts I’ll spit to rip this kid in scattering pieces/
-With weak lyrics and a bit name your chances of a win really decreases/

-I would be surprised to see you in a battle on RB where you get one vote/
-common you can’t be thinking you could win with lyrics you already pre-wrote/

-damaging your self in action you should of waited and elevated/
- like “going out with a loss” I got your merking here “dated”/
-A Newb as I can see -who wanna bet he’ll bite or re-write what I created/

~the Finish
-like electric sockets u seem amazed when im plugged to shock/
-a murder with words is telling me your outside is white on yea block/
- not because you seem white, but because you outlined in chalk/

^^ Overall dat wus a good verse!!

Quote:damaging your self in action you should of waited and elevated/
- like “going out with a loss” I got your merking here “dated”/
-A Newb as I can see -who wanna bet he’ll bite or re-write what I created/

^^ i think dat wus da best shyt in ur verse!!

Vote:Kautious

Reason:spiro's wus weak n he's a bitter!!....i hate bgitters!!