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Old 12-08-03, 11:46 AM   #4
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as birds fly high above we read novels by steven hawkin/

^ dope lines.. right there.. Kids that is what its about.. For all you wack little fuckers.. Who think your amazing.. I have seen you come better but this was still very good..

cuz we can cope with "yups" and "nopes" like we can climb lifes grimey slope/

^ juxtaposition.. Making it even better

One of the better pieces in the open mic..lol.. I might check Cam's piece now.. lol
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