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as birds fly high above we read novels by steven hawkin/
^ dope lines.. right there.. Kids that is what its about.. For all you wack little fuckers.. Who think your amazing.. I have seen you come better but this was still very good..
cuz we can cope with "yups" and "nopes" like we can climb lifes grimey slope/
^ juxtaposition.. Making it even better
One of the better pieces in the open mic..lol.. I might check Cam's piece now.. lol
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