damn Cam u came off hard. this piece is fucking marvellous.
it kept me reading and got my attenton straight from the beginning.
flowed almost perfectly, but 1 or 2 lines seemed to fall off, but u picked it back up.
good wordplay and vocab and multi and a great story telling peace.
cant correct u on nething really, cause how can u correct an almost perfect peace.
overall-brilliant.

hit my rhyme
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96675

cheers