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Old 12-08-03, 03:27 PM   #3
Menik
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This was alright i thought....something different, i liked it....flow was alright i thought....your vocab was alright as well, could have been a bit better though i thought, but still good....structure was good for this style i thought as well....overall this was alright...keep at it.
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