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Old 12-08-03, 03:45 PM   #5
Menik
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This wasnt that good....you need to work on a lot of things....structure needs some work, make the lines shorter cause you have them stretched out....add multies and internals, to help the flow out...overall this was ok...but keep elevating...and keep at it.
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