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Old 12-08-03, 03:58 PM   #13
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you had a good verse i think some lines were good but you could have made them hit hader like your finisher...could'a said your boyfriends dick got lip burn so now your gunna have to settle for mastebation or summin to say he's gay or a retarded or something but all in all this was a good verse cant wait to see what he fires back