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Old 12-08-03, 05:16 PM   #11
bouncedoggydog
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Nice read...

You did a good job at detailing the let downs you pops dropped in your life. Nice rhyme scheme, solid all the way though, very good flow. Overall great job. I say you put the past behind you and go see your father with an open mind and protected heart. I mean don't expect oo much and try not to carry hate or disgust into the encounter. I can relate to this in more ways than I care to explain.

Keep strong..
~Bounce~
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