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Old 12-08-03, 06:52 PM   #17
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lolol...Un Came Wit Sum Pretty Decent Concepts...But Damn Kid, If You Work On Your Structure And Flow, You Should Have Won This By Far...Also You Had Decent Ideas...Just ReWord Them Better..

B.I Came Out Ok...Good Structure And Flow...Punches Were Ok...Nothing Special But The Whole Verse Was Solid And Consistant..

I Would Have Voted Un...But Ya Verse Seemed Shaky And Flow Was Terrible...I'ma Vote B.I For A More Solid Verse..

Keep Elevating Un..
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