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Old 12-08-03, 06:56 PM   #2
Menik
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This was alright i thought....you seem to be getting better with each drop...structure in this was much better than your other ones, keep that up, but towards the end your lines got kinda stretched out just watch out for that stuff, it took away from the flow...but keep at it.
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