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Old 12-08-03, 07:04 PM   #7
Tsar Casm
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Look James Bond merked you johnny, better flow, punches, opener, closer, the whole nine yards
007-Dont use ", i your punches and metas should be figured out if they are good enough, pointing it out makes it seemed forced.
Johnny-
"you can be a laker and wear jersey 42 and still couldn’t be worthy//
when is comes to connecting punches 9/10 times ya ass is unworthy//"
thats not gona work, dont add de un or anything before a word to make it rhyme, also dont laugh at your own stuff

please drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97048
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