aigh't nice piece man. easy read, structers down, flows intact, multi's are on point topics a lil played but u worked pretty well with it I thought that your hook coulda been a bit better but it was ok went with the feel of what u were getting across. one more thing their wasn't a whole lot of complexity here but the basic rhyme scheme made for an easy read, keep droppin bro.

and hey I would leave a well structred feedback for ya masta but I'm juss really not in the mood for it havin a really really bad day. next time for sure though bro and leave me some feedback on my slower days open mic. peace bro.

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