I agree this was a nice piece, really good flow throughout the whole thing good structre and stayed on point, some good wordplay used in this and your rhyme scheme worked really well. keep at it bro, peace.

if u got the time peep my open mic "slower days" I know it's long but if u could read through it and leave some honest feedback it would be muchly appreciated. thanx in advance. peace.

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