like word perfect said needs some more multi's well for uski's behalf masta u were fine and for both ya's the vocab needed to be upped a bit but for a piece that was keyed in 20 mins it wasn't to bad, it was quick and easy to read. and both of your structres were ok not a whole lot of complexity here though. but nice piece guys topic stayed on point made for a good collab. keep up. peace.

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