whoa that was Long As Hell But i enjoyed the read.............ya structure was off is some bits of it you seemed to stretch ya Lines But It went well in the end.......Good Flow Went well Through the whole thing......It Was A Promising Topic and Ya Used it well.... Vocab was good....Ya use The Chorus well....Ya Chorus Was good nothing wrong with it.......allround 8/10 for it Kuz Peace Dawg.

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