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Old 12-08-03, 10:30 PM   #8
Rappad
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ok kids

breakdown

Relik
Little girl she can throw big punches;but will repeat the same Hit,
girl were not the Real World, please stop recycling what you spit,

^^no....bad opener

basically.... you couldn't ever be one of the top ten best femcees,
Lady D has already proven that to you repetitively; consecutively,

^^horrible...punch?

you just try to Get By with low Quality you are Too Late like Kweli,
honestly for you to Beat me... I would become a King like Rodney,

^^first line was nice....second blah

your bars are as uneven as your eyebrows, well; your face is ok,
but hey; lets move onto your body now,ya didn't want to show it,

^^flow poor....punch ok

none would dare approach it?your body odors are that ferocious?
keep your legs closed,mouth shut,your like early morning halitosis.
why else would you think your so unnoticed!!!

^lol...decent finisher


Tonya
like battlin a 'corpse' ya remains will be a "relic"....
you won't last "one round" like gettin killed in russian
roulette...

^^nice try at a play off his name but....no!!!!!lol....plus flow was off


yea i murda cats, then outline in chalk ya 'figure'...
they'll find you in the 'basement' but not hangin wit
'tigger'...

^blah...bad


i commend you on less losses, "ct reppin 203"...
goal is ten wins in a row, thank you for helpin me..

^^improving....


you hit with a few personals, like you work in
"human Resources"...
you should kill your "Ghostwriters' cause in ya verse
i see "forces"...

^^good...


i'ma end ya wins at 12, being a rhyme reaper don't make
you nice...
ya career is already on the "rocks" i just served it wit
"ice"...

^^lmfao.....nice closer, won it for you


Overall=Weak battle, I expected MUCH more from both...but Tonya had some nice punches...but both of ya work on ya flow.

Vote=tonya