Aiight.......

Da Breakdown....

Meters:Shyt wus nice,flow wus good,vocab wus good,etc...Punch's were there but not hittin dat good he kinda ate dem!!....but overall nice verse good job!

Quote:Here comes illiterate flamer bird Phoeniix, two eyes(i’s) blazing/
Used to be a cyclops but added an eye for male gazing/

It’s amazing that in appraising ya worth I found hell on earth/
Reading ya rhymes is like a perpetual state of Shaq’s vaginal birth/

Doesn’t reading that hurt?, well pussy, I just ripped you harder/
Keeping n00bs outta RB.com’s my cause, an’ I just made you it’s martyr/

Even ya choice of ghostwriter is bad, kid doesn’t have that much savvy/
but fuck that, you’re the ghost, ya don’t even have the presence of your avy/

My lyric is spit so cold that it encased ya in a wall of icicle spears/
Firebird changed the mold in that all that was flaming were his tears/

As a kid you experienced jeers, lack of peers was why ya buried yourself in mythology/
Bitch should of realized that to rise the Phoenix dies, should have invested your time in theology/

But bitch, it’s not blasphemy to say that even god can’t save you from this merking/
Just be glad that God’s a comedian, and your downfall is the reason he’s smirking/

Phoeniix was looking a little TENSE, so I shredded ‘em with my CLAUSE/
Phoeniix is so fucking inept in English, has to cover his dictionary in gause/


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Punch's-7/10
Multi's-6/10
Meta's-6/10
Wordplay-7/10
Structure-7/10
Overall-33-50

Ok Now.......

Phoenix:hot verse flow wus nice,structure wus nice,wordplay wus nice,..etc.......Punch's good sum personals like dat hot shyt keep it up!!

Quote:you act tough but you 'never was', u aint even a has-been
hows it feel to have a newb crunch you like the captain*
ya lips flappin, your rappin's so stagnant
i crack ya wack stanzas like an egg wit a plastic mallot
you got no talent, losin to a newb wit no wisdom
im not like the other new dudes that u took all of your wins from**
your shits dumb, vocab maskin ya wackness
caught u like an arachnid, makin ya last act tragic
quit laughin, cuz im catchin 5 votes like jurassic
im takin measures drastic to blast this herb fagget
dumbass had it, drowned cuz he ducked too far under
seperatin ya bars cuz they embarassed of eachother***
n00b1 and n00b2 posted in bitchslapped, so u embraced this
u only won cuz u sabotaged their verses, before you copy and pasted****
am i dyslexic? or are you always under brothers' covers?*****
the way im runnin Meters, its like im a marathon runner.

Punch's-8/10
Meta's-8/10
Multi's-7/10
Wordplay-7/10
Structure-8/10
Overall-38/50

Vote:Phoenix

reason:dis wus a good battle pretty close but Phoenix gets da upper hand!!.....i feel his verse wus stronger!!

ON3