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Old 12-08-03, 11:38 PM   #13
FlowzLuCiouS
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aiight...

Da Breakdown........

2way:shyt wus weak!!......ur rap wus not really a battle verse shyt wus soft,try to elevate more n keep battlin!!

u get me, that just wont happen
not wit the wack lyrics u b rapping
your flow so slow its like watching a flower grow
im the only one who will reap what i sow
u gonna beat me in this battle? the answer NO

u couldnt catch cold never mind me
playin wit a plastic gun does not make u a g
your game is weak and u spitt is all sloppy
u watch 8 mile all day to see wot u can copy
u just bin hit for 12 rounds long but u wont win like rocky!

^^ no hard Punch's at all!!.....try harder next time!!

Now.....

will:nice verse it still wus weak but atleast u know whatchu doin wit battlin!!......soo keep it up kid!!

Retreat and see your life tick through your own eyes..
Your the same thing your mother has between her two thighs..

^^dat wus da best Punchline!!...but it isnt all dat hott!!

Vote:Will

Reason:both verses were weak but dat 1 punch n all da otha shyt helped him get my vote!!....jus come stronger next time!!

ON3