View Single Post
Old 12-08-03, 11:55 PM   #7
MP~PHASIZ
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
 
Posts: 627
From: Canada
IP:

Quote:
Originally posted by FlowzLuCiouS
Aiight....

Da Breakdown......

eminem:shyt wus weak straight elementary wit it!!....flow wus really da only thing good!!,.......Punch's were weak buttin wus hittin soo overall weak verse!!

i dunno wut this boy thinks hes doin goin up gainst me in this battle
but wen hes goin up gainst me hes gon get his nuts crushed like ridin on a horse wit no saddle
in his rhyme he prolly gon talk bout pullin out his chrome
bitch say that shit on me and ill send ur ass home
damn now u can tell u dont wanna front wit me
i should start a business for youngnz like u...pay the fee
go ahead im done tellin u how its done
enough hints for the young boy go ahead n spit 1

^^ straight weak!!

Ok Now

MP:shyt was weak too but i think there might of been 1 punchline dat helped u get my vote!!................

Your win's resemble your skill...still none available****
Got his verse appraised...its worth was unvaluable

^^ nice punch!!....dat basically did it!!....flow wus good.....etc,...Overall da verse was alright do better next time!!

Vote:MP

Reason:He actually had punchlines!!

Weak Battle to vote on!!

ON3


As you may of noticed i said this was done real quick. After seeing his verse I knew how hard I had to come. So why would I use really creative shit on a battle such as this...think about it.
Send a message via MSN to MP~PHASIZ