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Old 12-09-03, 12:47 AM   #2
Menik
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but this was pretty good here, enjoyed it....structure was better in this one...Your vocab in this was real nice i liked that, keep that up...flow was alright got off at some points but still good...could have used some multies in this i thought....but overall this was alright...keep at it.
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