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12-09-03, 10:40 AM
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Dev
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i cant say i really liked this, basic as hell....vocab needs improved, along with ya rhyming and structure, i saw you tried to put a few mutlis n shit, but it still wasnt very good...try and think of an original topic...elevate...pZ
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