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Old 12-09-03, 11:34 AM   #2
vanes
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yo big brother

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waaats up, now listen juz coz shots is my big brother i aint gonna be easy on im,...check it...

yo flow was ok bruv but u need to keep practising and keep writing then u'll b better, yo rhymes ok could be worked on more,
shizzle, your rhymes were heavy bro they rhymed well and yo wordplay was cool outta both of u i would say shizzle gets it, sorry bruv but u need to elevate cuz, piece
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