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Old 12-09-03, 11:49 AM   #5
Baron Mynd
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Well ..

.. i seriously don't know where to start on this, i read through
it and my attention was wandering before half way if im honest = /
The flow to me seemed off by a lot, it seemed to drift away off
and on between topics .. a lot of the time the rhyming was basic, the caps lock didnt really help much - just hurt my fucking eyes to read this garbage. Wordplay was like .. non existant? Maybe its just me cause the newbies seemed to get it * shrugs* Overall i didnt like this at all. Sorry.

Elevate.
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