You reply to my Open Mic with feedback...

That's got asshole written all over it...

Seemed pretty pointless to me ..
wish i hadnt wasted the time
reading to be honest. Basic rhymes,
nothing really eye opening .. flow &
multi's need work .. if your gonna
write anything at all, at least make
it something worth actually reading.

I hate pieces like this that just waste my time.

Sorry.

Reply to my RSTL piece = )

And you have the nerve to ask for my feedback in return?

Yeah, right...

Maybe after you take the stick outta your ass.

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